The Bird’s Movie Review
The film, The Bird’s is a film that is very interesting and in some parts very graphic. The special effects could be better than what they were. If the film The Bird’s was in the academy awards as of today, my opinion is that it wouldn’t win anything. I don’t think it would win anything because animated features today are much more improved than what they were when the film was first made. The animations in the film were poorly showed, I personally did not like the film, in some parts it did get interesting but in others it got really boring due to the poorly showed animations and you could tell the scenery in the film was not real. The film was supposed to be a horror movie but turned into a comedy because of how the animations and special effects were shown. I expected the movie to be scary and shocking but because of everything that was shown poorly the film sucked! Instead of being a horror movie, as i expeted, it didn't happen. THe movie became a comedy as it went on. The ending of the movie was really disappointing to me because it really didn’t have a definite ending, it didn’t show or tell you what really happened it just ended with no purpose. If I had to rate this film, I would give it two stars out of five because it didn’t have any good animations, scenery, or special effects. If I had to rate it as of today, I would give in zero stars out of five stars because movies today are animated very well and the filmmakers work on the movie to make it right.If the film was shown today in a theater, i don't think anyone would like it. I rated the film only two stars because it wasn't as interesting as i thought it would be. I rated it zero strs if i had to rate it as of today because movies today are much more improved.
Selena, you repeat yourself a lot in your review. Try explaining them a little more in depth. explain why the animations were so bad.
ReplyDeleteFirst off you should probably lengthen your essay it doesn't look like its two pages. If I were you I would reread your essay and change up quite a few of the sentences because you repeat yourself a lot. Last, you use the word animated of animations a lot. Try changing it in a few places. You have the base of your essay now you just have to build on it.
ReplyDeleteSelena, make sure and proof read this and fix the work The you have the t and the h capatilized when the t should be the only one. Also you have a few spelling errors in the last sentence.Finally make sure you watch for run on sentences.
ReplyDeletea very interesting peace of work i would reraed you it out load. also i would add info on the actor and there and when the birds, also you had a couple spelling error but over all great job.
ReplyDeleteyour essay is shorter then it is expected so find a place to but details in your essay. But try not to say the same thing over and over through out your essay because that can make it where the readers dont want to watch the film because they are probably thinking to themselves that you might not of exactly watched the whole thing or you dont know what your talking about.
ReplyDeleteIts to short that is in no way two pages. you repeat yourself alot and it is very choppy you should read it out loud next time.there are also a couple spelling mistakes in the last paragraph. but it was very good besides that.
ReplyDeleteYour movie review is very very short. Your should have gave more description to the story or talk more about the fake props. You also repeated your self alot in your review.
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